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Leading article: A vicious and unfair personal attack

Jacqui Janes was clearly upset by the letter of condolence she received last month from Gordon Brown in the wake of the death of her son, Jamie, in Afghanistan. Nevertheless, it does seem grossly unfair of Ms Janes to interpret the letter as an "insult" from the Prime Minister.

If the letter was clumsily drafted, the responsibility surely lies with Mr Brown's poor eyesight and bad handwriting rather than any intention to offend. Moreover, the sentiments expressed in the letter, which Ms Janes has made public, were entirely sensitive. There was nothing in the slightest bit "disrespectful" about its contents. If Ms Janes chooses to interpret the letter as a deliberate insult, that is her right. But the rest of us can make up our own minds about the Prime Minister's intentions when he drafted it. Sadly some elements of the media have used this unfortunate business to mount a viciously personal attack on Mr Brown.

The Sun newspaper, which last month announced with great fanfare its support for the Conservative Party, has chosen to fan the flames of this affair in a quite disgraceful manner. It has used Ms Janes' reaction, along with accusations that the Prime Minister failed to bow his head during the remembrance ceremony at the Cenotaph at the weekend, to imply that he is personally indifferent to the fate of British troops and does not truly respect the sacrifices they have made.

This is an incendiary suggestion at a time when British troops are engaged in a fierce anti-insurgency campaign in Afghanistan. British service personnel have endured their most deadly year since the Falklands War. The mood of the country towards our military presence in Afghanistan is increasingly volatile. Responsible politicians and media outlets need to tread carefully while feelings are running so high.

A robust public debate on the Government's strategy in Afghanistan is entirely justified. But Mr Brown's political opponents should think very carefully before attempting to present the Prime Minister as somehow personally hostile to the best interests of British troops. These attacks are not only unfair; in the present febrile climate they risk being downright irresponsible.

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Unfair personal attack
[info]juliandbsmith wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 08:03 am (UTC)

I quite agree, although the newspapers are riding high over MP's expenses scandals etc. I can't help but think that all this disrespect has gone too far. Mr Cameron is not immune from this kind of treatment and I'm sure that, if he is elected, after the initial euphoria he will be treated the same. Gordon Brown is the Prime Minister for God's sake, the post deserves respect even if you don't respect the man. I'm sure that in the long run the papers are in for a backlash, either from the public who will seek better (or worse) commentary on the internet. If you want aggression, innuendo, scandal and outrage the web does it better.

The really dangerous thing is that this constant disrespect will fan discontent into disorder and direct action. The rise of armed direct action would necessitate severe curbs on press freedom. Abuse of that freedom is dangerous, particularly to foreign owned newspaper proprietors seeking to influence election outcomes. You couldn't see the Russians or Iranians putting up with that one.
indifferent
[info]jaffgyp wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 09:47 am (UTC)
oh - so the Inde is after more brownie badges?
like most folk i have simply assumed that most politicians are personally indifferent to the welfare of the poor bloody armed services - and to that of almost anyone else outside the national and (especially) european magic jobs and expenses for the boys and girls circles..
'vicious and unfair'? - any politician who so loses the plot that his sleazy PR-inspired handwritten letter of quasi-commiseration makes this sort of an error gets what he deserves from the hurt and now insulted recipient;
actually i wouldn't be surprised if the whole thing was a set-up by a non-brownie getting their own back?
For once Brown is being hard done by
[info]jeanshaw wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 10:28 am (UTC)
Totally agree that the gutter press have gone well over the top on this , I do not like Brown, the worst Chancellor this country has ever had , but this personal abuse is totally unwarranted. I actually feel sympathy for him !!!!
The Prime Minister's conduct is indefensible, so what's with all these excuses?
[info]peter_holl wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 10:40 am (UTC)
Have we got to the stage where poor drafting and bad handwriting are excused by
having bad eyesight? Do you think that the Queen or Guardsman Janes' commanding officer send out such untidy letters?

Anyone with self awareness of himself would have learnt that if one is to write letters of condolence by hand, they should be written tidily, without mistakes, and with a fountain pen (not a greasy felt tip). Gordon Brown's appalling slap dash badly spaced, hastily written scribble says everything about the man - none of it positive. Sending out semi-legible letters reveals that the sender couldn't give a damn what the recipient thinks and that the reader will have to try to fathom what it says as the writer is too important to care. Bad eyesight is a pathetic excuse as is "I've got bad handwriting" - the man has had years to try to improve it and the fact that he hasn't bothered says he really doesn't want to because it's too much of an effort.

Why are you criticising the recipient of the letter for drawing the conclusion that this piece of shoddy work is anything other than an insult? Anyone looking at it will draw the same conclusion - it is messy and its content says nothing personal - it's a standard condolence letter.

That the PM has taken the trouble to write to the families of servicemen is part of his job description as he is part of the shower who sent them to their deaths without properly funding or equipping the armed services to do the dirty work of this Government which hasn't even got a plan as to what we are really doing there. That he has made a botch up of even this simple task is entirely in character as he made a botch up of pretty much everything he has touched.


To be fair
[info]popskihaynes wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 10:48 am (UTC)
I don't disagree with this Editorial even though I detest Gordon Brown, it is grossly unfair and there should be no question that he meant any disrespect, the Sun is milking the natural grief of a mother who has lost her son and that is disgraceful.

That said, Gordon Brown given his known physical limitations, should be dictating what he wants to say to someone to type it up properly and just sign the finished result. There is no point now in not doing so in the future and if the sentiments expressed are genuine, it is just as personal. The letterhead and signature are likely more important as a personal acknowledgement to the bereaved than a page of grossly illegible handwriting.
Typical bleating
[info]ed_fender wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 10:52 am (UTC)
In the circumstances, failing to spell the dead soldier's name correctly looks deeply disrespectful and careless. Blaming Brown' eyesight (funny how that's only come up since he's been in trouble), sounds like a pitiful excuse.

You lot should be ashamed of yourselves.
Re: Typical bleating
[info]boudica_brown wrote:
Wednesday, 11 November 2009 at 08:04 am (UTC)
Only come up now, you say? What you mean is you only just became aware of Gordon's eyesight problems then? Because it's been in the news for years and been in headlines in recent weeks, as it has been proven medically to have gotten worse. Criticise all you want, but try to stay up on current events... no, it hasn't just become an issue because of this letter fiasco. It's been an issue for some time.
[info]fwdinsight wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 10:53 am (UTC)
This disrepect has become bad but then again the British people have not been so badly lied to over so many things by the last two leaders. When was the last time you were invited to a Town hall meeting by the leader of Prime Minister. In the country I lived in it regularly happened least once a year in the big cities and we asked him questions. We could have asked many questions about the EU, army etc. If Mr Brown held town hall meetings with the country as used to happen in the past they people would not feel quite so bad about things where we have constantly been deceived. This woman was angry and right to take him to task as are many of our countrymen who know we have been lied to deceived and treated like enemies. You only hide secrets from enemies about what you are doing. These are the people of Britain and I am furious that these people are robbing us of our heritage and handing us over to foreign cultures who have no understanding for Democracy. She had a right to record it other wise there would be the usual bland denial. She had the absolute right to take him to task and record it. You are allowed to record anything. I do it all the time when I am dealing with the arrogant lying banks who although they have owed me money will not answer my recorded letters. The Ombudsman service even has problems getting them to respond. So I record when they phone or I phone so as to get answers. So record all you want, its your phone. When was the last time you were invited to a Town hall meeting by the leader of Prime Minister. In the country I lived in it regularly happened least once a year in the big cities and we asked him questions. We could have asked many questions about the EU, army etc. If Mr Brown held town hall meetings with the country as used to happen in the past they people would not feel quite so bad about things where we have constantly been deceived. This woman was angry and right to take him to task as are many of our countrymen who know we have been lied to deceived and treated like enemies. You only hide secrets from enemies about what you are doing.
These are the people of Britain and I am also furious that these people are robbing us of our heritage and handing us over to foreign cultures who have no understanding for Democracy. She had a right to record it other wise there would be the usual bland denial. She had the absolute right to take him to task and record it. You are allowed to record anything. I do it all the time when I am dealing with the arrogant lying banks who although they have owed me money will not answer my recorded letters. The Ombudsman service even has problems getting them to respond. So I record when they phone or I phone so as to get answers. So record all you want, its your phone.
[info]20_michael_20 wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 10:58 am (UTC)
the mother has shown great rudeness to Mr. Brown and should be ashamed of both her behaviour and her appalling partnership with the Sun..............
OK for us to be recorded without our consent, why not them?
[info]peter_holl wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:27 am (UTC)
I find your comment very odd. Is it for real?? Does the PM deserve courtesy if he telephones to justify himself for his shoddy letter of condolence?

If your son bled to death because no medivac helicopters were available because the PM didn't want to pay for them, you'd be cross.

As for the Sun... it's saying what the rest of us have been saying for years - Gordon Brown is unfit to be PM and it's time he was exposed for the second rate oaf he is.
Re: OK for us to be recorded without our consent, why not them?
[info]thelzdking wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:46 am (UTC)
Yes, but it's why the Sun are saying it; because it has recently cosied up to the Conservatives.
Murdoch manipulates the press to manipulate the population to manipulate the politicians. Qui bono?
Re: OK for us to be recorded without our consent, why not them?
[info]peter_holl wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 12:00 pm (UTC)
Murdoch always looks to his own self interest and if his readers desert Labour, he too must follow them.

All the newspapers in the last decade have cosied up to Labour... even the Torygraph has pinkos writing apologetic articles which are pro-Labour. Newspapers aren't going to win any elections this time around: personal emails and Youtube will win it.
Unfair Personal Attack
[info]baileytibbs wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 10:58 am (UTC)
I have no sympathy for Brown at all. He put himself forward to be PRIME MINISTER. That is supposed to be the top job in the country and yet everytime something goes wrong we get excuses about character flaws or sight defects. If he wasn't able to do ALL aspects of the job then he should have realised this and kept himself in a deputy position, where mistakes like this are forgiveable. Maybe I expect too much from a Prime Minister but I certainly feel that Gordon Brown isn't up to the job and many are suffering as a result of his desperate desire to cling on to power. Whether the other choices we have are up to the job themselves remains to be seen.
UNFAIR ATTACK? ........ RUBBISH. HE'S AN IDIOT!
[info]sidsnot wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:13 am (UTC)
Imagine you are a patient given an over-dose of drugs because the Doctor couldn't be bothered to check properly and you suffer irreparable brain damage. Is that OK?

ALL Politicians are a waste of space but this Brown fellow is a walking disaster to the country and himself. If he can't get a letter of condolence right he doesn't deserve to be in charge of tying-up his own shoe-laces let alone anything else.

Stop trying to excuse the idiot.
[info]smaily24 wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:24 am (UTC)
I completely agree with this editorial, and would go as far as to say that the Sun are abusing their position by using this poor woman's grief to sell newspapers. As for coming out in support of Cameron - whatever happened to a fair and impartial press?
Impartial Press??
[info]peter_holl wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:55 am (UTC)
Newspapers have never been impartial... they certainly haven't been fair to political opponents. The Independent isn't being impartial in its leader by stating that the attack on Gordon Brown's is "vicious and unfair"... it's being pro-Gordon Brown in defending the indefensible.

As for the Sun, it's been pro-Labour these past 15 years, and its stock in trade, like the Independent, is to criticise politicians when bad decisions have been made. It's now pro-Tory... it usually goes with the flow when it can see where its readers' sympathies lie. Murdoch will get no special treatment from the Tories if he opposes them... he's has a run for his money with the Labour lot, and he can see the writing on the wall that they are now a bunch of losers.
PR lacking - or a symptom of bigger problems?
[info]barncactus wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:27 am (UTC)
If I had received such a badly-drafted letter, I would have made a huge fuss via the press then sealed the original away in a bank vault for my successors. It will be worth quite a lot one day, mainly for the things it says about late 2009 Brown and his (lack of) PR skills. Can you imagine TB falling into this trap? No, someone on his sofa would have snatched it away, given it to A Campbell to re-draft and type out neatly and TB would have signed the final version which would have been a masterpiece of PR-write. Not felt pen gobbledegook. Then AC would have carefully leaked it to friendly press friends to make sure that no 'unauthorised versions' got into circulation and clouded the issues.

This episode speaks volumes for the organisational mess in Number 10 right now. But that does not mean that I prefer the game playing that went on under TB. Brown is probably sincere but hopeless.

Along with this episode goes the bank transaction tax, Brown's latest idea, that was not even floated in the diplomatic back rooms before he blurted it out. Did it occur to him that others might have different ideas, and that those might be as influential as the USA and many others?

Rescuing the world is Brown's self-announced speciality. Perhaps he should concentrate on rescuing himself.
Missing the point
[info]peter_lovatt wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:46 am (UTC)
The whole thing stinks

The fact is that the Prime Minister - the most important person in government (OK, open to debate) took the time to hand write a letter to the soldiers family should speak for itself.

For the Sun to abuse the soldiers death, and his families grief, to score points is possibly the lowest they have ever sunk, and that is saying something.

They should crawl back under their stone.
Re: Missing the point
[info]aurora206 wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 11:29 pm (UTC)
Apparently not enough time or care was taken, hence the cause for debate ? The fact that Brown couldn`t be bothered getting a letter of condolence right, speaks volumes for his indifference towards our servicemen, for which there is no excuse whatsoever.
Re: Missing the point
[info]walterwall wrote:
Wednesday, 11 November 2009 at 05:32 pm (UTC)
Brown manages to find time to write to contestants on TV "talent" shows. I think that puts things into perspective. He is a self-serving disgrace.

Don't let your prejudice against the Sun colour your views.
A squalid, depressing episode ...
[info]john_b_ellis wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 12:07 pm (UTC)
If Ms Janes had an issue with Mr Brown over the equipment of British troops for their task, or about the legitimacy or strategy of the Afghan military intervention, and had taken the opportunity of his letter and subsequent telephone call, to express her reasons for and her feelings about that, who could blame her, especially in the light of the magnitude of her loss? There are reasons enough for her to do so on all those grounds.

But to pillory the man, as it seems, for his handwriting is demeaningly unworthy - not least because she does so from behind the ramparts of her bereavement, shielded, in this post-Diana era where "feelings" seem to justify almost any excess, from challenges and criticisms. The effect of this will be to remove any semblance the human touch from future letters.

And now, of course, she's even more protected by having "the Sun" on her side. This, of course, is just the sort of journalism that's native to "the Sun", notwithstanding the urbanity of Trevor Kavanagh and the plausibly articulate pugnacity of George Pascoe-Watson.

The paper yet again provides the best counter-argument to the ideal of popular democracy in the UK context, and even, perhaps, a long-term threat to its healthy survival.

Scummy at every level, "the Sun" leaves a thin layer of scum on all the parts of British life that it touches.

Though at least, just for once, all this has achieved something I thought virtually impossible: that I'd experience a surge of genuine sympathy and fellow-feeling for Gordon Brown.
Falkland war and this war
[info]cepelli wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 12:17 pm (UTC)
Falkland war was a rush job as well like Iraq and Afghanistan war.
Argentina dictator was ready for a talk and negotiation. No,Margaret Teacher would not take that and declare war without blinking. So many British soldiers died.

Reputation and face saving only can be saved by allowing the soldiers to die,thats what happening now.
Winning in Falkland war was clear,how can you define the winning in Afghanistan? You can not kill all of them,Alqaida and Taliban can not be there only way to get high value of those individuals bribe the Pakistani army heads to find them. its an ugly option option but only option considering the reality of the situation.As long as innocent people murdered those Afg-Pak border people will not give you the information about those individuals. I am an ordinary people I can guest this becouce it is about ordiary peoples behavier. All those drones killing people and you expect cooperation from them.

It is so stupid to stay there. Soviet Union lost the war there. Can't you get the hint ?
Pot Kettle Black
[info]jim_jimmeney wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 12:18 pm (UTC)
What has the quality of someone's handwriting got to do with the words they are writing, some replies here seem to indicate that the state of Gordon Brown's handwriting is of greater importance than the actual content of the letter. Image is not more important than substance people. I have pretty poor handwriting but that doesn't make my use of language any better or worse - doctors are renown for poor handwriting, should they all be struck off until they have mastered calligraphy?

I have no doubt that Mr Brown wasn't intentionally disrespectful but the harsh reality is that he did get Jamie Janes' name wrong and that is a dreadful error on his behalf. Imagine if your child died fighting a morally dubious war on foreign soil during a time when we constantly hear how ill equipped our troops are and the lack of support they then get from our government if injured. You then receive a letter of condolence from the Prime Minister getting your child's name wrong, how would you feel - would you jump to Mr Brown's defence or would emotion take over?

To use your own words it is also 'grossly unfair' of the Independent to criticise a grieving mother who feels insulted by the prime minister regardless of either the Prime Ministers intent or the editor of this newspapers personal view on the matter. This article is actually a very similar style of reporting (for want of a more accurate word) to the Sun's. Yes the Sun's behavior is disgraceful but that is nothing new from that offensive adult comic and is hardly unique in the wonderful world of the media. Thinking about it I don't recall the independent being all that respectful to Gordon and Sarah Brown when they lost their prematurely born daughter, it just took advantage of a photo opportunity (quality journalism that).

Gordon Brown made an easily avoidable mistake which has been deliberately reported badly and turned into moral panic by a Murdoch owned newspaper (shocking I know), the best thing we can do is stop giving the Sun the attention it wants. Using your leading article to have a pop at Jacqui Janes is not the way to go, criticise The Sun all you want but opening your article with two paragraphs targeting Mrs Janes just to make a point is also 'downright irresponsible'.
For those of you so blinkered by prejudice...
[info]rockinrog wrote:
Tuesday, 10 November 2009 at 12:19 pm (UTC)
it is illegal to record phone calls secretly. The Sun is either exploiting this woman's raw grief or else she is such a bitter and twisted person that she somehow thinks doing this sort of thing is constructive.

I don't think Brown's the best PM we've had, but I wonder how many letters of condolence Thatcher wrote during the Falklands War. I'm guessing none.

I wish the relatives of those soldiers killed in action would show some dignity now and again. Whether they should be in Afghanistan or not, it's what the troops deserve.
Dear GB, think b 4 u rite...
[info]boudica_brown wrote:
Wednesday, 11 November 2009 at 08:15 am (UTC)
I just find it rich that in a world that has spent the past two generations perfecting the art of electronic communication, in which ending a marriage by email and texting "C U 2nite m8" is the height of personal communication, is being led down a garden path by a newspaper that has in the past actually supported our involvement in wars in which we send our largely semi-literate children to die.

Supporting Brown
[info]fowerty_frapper wrote:
Wednesday, 11 November 2009 at 01:44 pm (UTC)
Oh, how I laughed when I read "Imagine you are a patient given an over-dose of drugs because the Doctor couldn't be bothered to check properly and you suffer irreparable brain damage. Is that OK?" I mean, this is a letter - a letter from a Primeminister to one of the 60 or so MILLION of us in the country. Did he have to write at all? NO. Was he under an oligation to write? NO So isn't it the case, that ANY acknowledgement from an MP, let alone the PM should be regarded as a positive gesture? YES. If I have any qualms at all about Brown writing it is in the sympaththy he gives to murdereds - I am so sick of reading all these comments about our brave soldiers. I'm sorry but they go to Afganistan for political reasons to KILL PEOPLE. Over 2,500 civilians have died in the last year - makes our soldiers death - who have no justication for being there in the 1st place, pale into insignificance. Pluse the fact that most civilians are not trained killers. And people are upset about bad grammar?

Robust debate
[info]josef_k_32 wrote:
Thursday, 12 November 2009 at 10:22 am (UTC)
You state that

"A robust public debate on the Government's strategy in Afghanistan is entirely justified. But Mr Brown's political opponents should think very carefully before attempting to present the Prime Minister as somehow personally hostile to the best interests of British troops. These attacks are not only unfair; in the present febrile climate they risk being downright irresponsible."
Professor Jean Bricmont elaborates on your position:

"(I)t is axiomatic that the motivations of our governments are pure and basically identical to those presented in official discourse (defense of human rights or democracy, etc). One is of course free to challenge the attainability of these objectives or the wisdom of those who try to implement them; but to question the purity of the motivations or their legitimacy is to put oneself outside the bounds of respectable discourse.

Thus the debate will typically be centered on questions such as: do we have enough power, resolve, etc. to achieve our goals? Are our leaders sufficiently clever, determined, and strong? The more vociferous the debates, the more the implicit assumptions concerning the nobility of the intentions come to be reinforced" (Bricmont, J, 'The responsibility of the intellectual', in 'The Cambridge Companion to Chomsky', PP:284-5, 2005).

Many people believe that The Independent is committed to holding power to account. However, I cannot find one article in which you assert: "A robust public debate on the Government's motives for being in Afghanistan is entirely justified". Will you start robustly challenging the Government's stated reasons for being in Afghanistan, or will you remain unwilling to place yourself outside the bounds of polite discourse?

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Andrew Grice: Enough of the philosophy, Mr Cameron.

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Christina Patterson: Very nice - but forgiveness is overrated

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Mary Dejevsky: Why not call Blair now and wrap it up?

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