John Rentoul: Obama soars on his oratory, but errors may yet deflate him
A dull acceptance speech and a political marriage of convenience put the US hopefuls neck and neck
Sunday, 31 August 2008
The thrill of politics, at its simplest, is that of the horse race. In this country, most of us have forgotten what a close race looks like. Our last truly competitive general election was in 1992. Last summer, until Gordon Brown shied at the fence, we were briefly returned to the urgency and the drama of the daily battle for advantage. But America has provided two consecutive two-horse races since the primaries began at the start of the year. This is politics at its most compelling, when the winner is the one who makes the fewest mistakes.
Barack Obama and John McCain traded mistakes last week. Obama's mistake was to stop being surprising. Just at the moment when most non-political Americans are starting to take a closer interest in the campaign, he did exactly what everyone expected him to do. Having chosen a boring running mate, one designed to compensate for his lack of experience of foreign policy, he went on to give a low-key acceptance speech, with policies in it designed to present him as a leader of seriousness and substance.
It felt like exactly the speech we would have expected him to deliver if we had not had as long to think about it as he and his speechwriters had. Start by praising Hillary. Do the life story, but don't dwell. Have a go at George Bush's record and tie John McCain to it. Do a meaty section on policy to answer the vacuity charge. Do national security, with all bells and whistles. Close with the new politics and Martin Luther King, who provided the ready-cooked peroration: "We cannot turn back."
It was received with adulation and praise, especially on this side of the Atlantic, but the race remains finely balanced because it was not the speech Obama could have delivered.
The policy section was so Old Democrat that the rust came off on my hands. It was heavily protectionist, and clunkingly Big Government. He promised to make green cars, college education and health care "affordable", a word readily translated as "count those spoons".
He promised "to finally meet our moral obligation to provide every child a world-class education", words that could have been uttered by any opposition politician anywhere in the Anglophone world. Indeed, words that have been uttered by almost every opposition politician everywhere in the Anglophone world. Tony Blair once promised the same thing, moral obligation and all. Gordon Brown, when he was a sort of opposition politician in 2006, said: "Our ambition is to have a world-class education system."
The one hint of Obama the reformer that we had in the primaries – that he would take on the teachers' unions – shrank to asking teachers for "higher standards and more accountability".
He promised tax cuts for 95 per cent of working families. I remember John Smith promising something similar just before our last close election in 1992. He admitted that "many of these plans will cost money", although the single sentence explaining how he would pay for them was as tediously familiar – and unconvincing – as the promise of world-class education. He would pay for them by "closing corporate loopholes and tax havens" and by going "through the federal budget, line by line, eliminating progra that no longer work and making the ones we do need work better and cost less".
The Iraq section was puzzling. One of the first things everyone said when he chose Joe Biden as his running-mate (after "drawing attention to weakness") was that Biden had supported the Iraq invasion. So why boast, "I stood up and opposed this war" when the man he chose to plug his foreign policy gap did not? If there were a moment that called for Obama's thoughtfulness and intelligence – completely lacking from this speech – this was it.
Whatever one's view of the decision to invade, McCain was right about the need for the US to deploy more troops. Far from being an advantage to Obama, therefore, the issue of Iraq is balanced, and the selection of Biden tilted it further McCain's way. Obama's harking back to his opposition to the invasion reinforced the impression that Democratic activists are hell-bent on refighting the losing battles of 2000 and 2004. Al Gore, in his speech to the convention, even said: "Today, we face essentially the same choice as in 2000."
You can see why he might think so, but it was the wrong thing to say. It is part of the biggest mistake that Obama made last week, which was to try to sell the message that McCain equals President Bush. Everyone in America knows that McCain is about as far from George W Bush as it is possible to be and still be a Republican. That was why he won the party's nomination. He would have had no difficulty at this week's Republican Convention in untangling hielf from the Bush baggage and floating free to catch Obama. But in his eagerness to compensate for his own weaknesses, McCain has made his mistake.
The element of surprise and the timing of his announcement of Sarah Palin as his running mate cannot be faulted. He cut off Obama's extended media ovation in less than 24 hours. And Palin, "the Margaret Thatcher of the North", certainly has an eye-catching biography. Married to Todd, of Yup'ik Native Alaskan ancestry, she is pictured on her official website with a dead caribou. But her selection was so transparently a political choice, rather than a partnership with someone capable of assuming the presidency at any moment. McCain met her twice before making his decision.
The idea that Hillary Clinton's supporters would switch to his ticket just because there is a woman on it is calculated to offend the "sisterhood of the travelling pantsuits", as Hillary called them. Especially when Palin is so conspicuously anti-abortion.
That means the main campaign starts with the candidates still evenly matched, as they have been for months already. As far as we can tell, the implications of America's choice for the rest of the world, including Britain, are surprisingly limited. Both candidates are greener and more multilateralist than President Bush. But the horse race will keep us transfixed for two more months – at a time when British politics has reverted, rather unexpectedly, to being uncompetitive.
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This article is breathtakingly biased, on the verge of being racist. No one, and i mean no one, can say that the Obama's speech at the Democratic Convention (seen by 40 millions of Americans and hundreds of millions around the world) wasn't an historic and oustanding speech on the leveln and impact of Martin Luther King 'I Have a Dream'. The only reason this journalist is so dismissive of Obama substance and insirational and powerful appeal is the closesiest thing to a racist stand i have read so far, anywhere. Please next time get your fact rights or avoid writing such ludicrous articles!
Posted by Yasmin | 04.09.08, 15:27 GMT
It's simplistic to claim Obama's speech didn't sparkle as it should have. Obama's accent on education is precisely the concrete policy change that actually would mean something after Bush's "no child left behind' abysmal failure. Obama's addressing health care concerns is another issue of paramount importance to the American middle class. But to Mr. Rentoul it all sounds somewhat flat.
Alas, this journalist thinks McCain's running mate is sexier than Biden. Until the hockey mom, ex runner-up to Miss Alaska would have to take over the Oval office. Thatcher, my foot.
Posted by Irene | 01.09.08, 02:02 GMT
Oh, I almost forgot! The pretension of the fake Grecian temple setting, and the high-decibel, rock-star format, totally overwhelmed the history implicit in the event. Ancient Greeks had a word for it: HUBRIS.
Posted by Mike | 31.08.08, 23:47 GMT
Obama, in one catchall sentence, promised to end the war in Iraq responsibly, (even as it is already ending responsibly), to end our dependence on oil from the Middle East, to defeat terrorism and nuclear proliferation; poverty and genocide; climate change and disease, to eliminate capital gains taxes for the small businesses and to cut taxes for 95 percent of all working families.
Anyone for a joint?!
Posted by Mike | 31.08.08, 23:44 GMT
I stopped buying IoS on a regular basis some time ago, fed up with John Rentoul's weekly column in praise of Tony Blair. I bought it again today, and see he has transferred his affections to John McCain (funny that, as Obama and his hero TB have a lot in common). No, wait, he manages to slip in that McCain has done something wrong too in the very last paragraph, having drawn our attention at some length to all the 'mistakes' made by Obama in his acceptance speech.
John Rentoul for president, I reckon, as he alone seems to know what everyone is doing wrong. Come to that, make him prime minister too. Then at last we will be spared his partisan opinion columns in the IoS.
Posted by Sara McKenna | 31.08.08, 12:58 GMT
I am amazed that the Independent printed this silly article. Negative, negative, negative all through. What was the editor thinking about??? The paper has gone way down in my estimation.
Posted by Patrick McGlynn | 31.08.08, 12:36 GMT
John Rentoul finally destroys his own reputation for political judgment with this article. How could anyone, whatever their political beliefs, watch and listen to Obama's acceptance speech and not be moved to tears (unless you're GOP) or scared witless (if you are GOP)? A "dull speech"? I suspect Rentoul hasn't actually found it on YouTube yet. I can't believe that he was actually in the stadium.
BTW Colin Bowley and others with the same attitude: can we cut down the "you British" attacks on a whole nation? I think you'll find, if you talk to us, that at moments like Obama's speech, many of us renew our marriage vows with the American people. You're right about Mystic Mogg. Every statement he utters is a political misjudgment. Just like Rentoul in this article. If you want an intelligent analysis of the state of play between McCain and Obama, read Andrew Sullivan in the Sunday Times today.
Posted by Bob | 31.08.08, 11:10 GMT
I am waiting for Senator Biden to debate Governor Palin. The liberal press and elitists are already trying to check her university education to see if she is qualified! I checked out her record and accomplishments and she has a much better record than Senator Obama. Of course the Democrats started screaming no experience; however, her experience of being a Mayor, then Governor is much better than a Senator who only votes Present. A Mayor and Governor have to make the tough daily decisions which affects the lives of all the citizens. The people of Alaska thinks she is certainly qualified and gives her an 80% approval rating for what she has accomplished. I personally would trust her over Biden any day as he has always voted a straight Democrat Party line. She even appointed Democrats to be in her cabinet as she choose ability to get the job done over politics. Exactly what is needed in Washington!
Posted by Gene44 | 31.08.08, 10:58 GMT
Shades of the Amazing Mrs. Pritchard: Sarah Palin looks like scoring with the essential voters of the campaign -- the bluecollars so despised by Obama, working moms and dads.
Obama just doesn't have the common touch nor does he have wit or a sense of humour.
Posted by gm1000 | 31.08.08, 10:48 GMT
I'm forced to wonder what exactly would make Joe Biden "boring"? The man is a well known, very adept public speaker-- he is known to have a loose-cannon mouth and very sharp tongue. The man could practically be registered under the title "Attack Dog"... I think you'll find nothing boring or uninteresting about what either Obama or Biden has to say. In any forthcoming debates or speaches expect to see Biden turn the Repulican's nominees butts into ground beef. As to Bush and McCain being spread on either side of the conservative spectru... well, honestly what ARE your credentials? I'd highly suggest checking McCain's voting record and recent talking points. The 2000 primary McCain is VERY different from the 2008 Presidential Nominee McCain, the later being so close to Bush that they must share the same bed and clothing. Hell, I believe that the 2000 election McCain would completely and willingly denounce the 2008 McCain... the man has become a walking joke.
Posted by Adam | 31.08.08, 09:22 GMT
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