Letter: Lakeland haiku
Sir: Further to the discussion of haiku (Letters, 18 April), it is worth noting that Wordsworth used the 5-7-5 syllable form in the two known Lakeland examples.
Sheep in Grasmere Vale
Suffer intimations of
Immortality
Helvellyn looks big
From the far off lake: up close
It looks bloody huge
After such a promising start, it is a pity he never continued, but then he would never say in 17 syllables what he could say in 170.
Glyn Matthews
Windermere, Cumbria
Join our commenting forum
Join thought-provoking conversations, follow other Independent readers and see their replies